A poem to my two friends: Tro and Nory
Two people on a smooth country lane,
Hand in hand they walk,
Nothing too great to cause them pain,
On and on they continue to talk.
One day they reach a vast river,
Seeing all the riches at the other side,
Welling up is the desire to cross over,
Yet the boat too small for two to ride.
So the man decides to go alone,
With so many promises to be kept alive,
Leaving the woman in tearful moan,
So grievedly yet strongly she has to srtive.
Each day she waits with a heavy heart,
Reminiscing haunting ghosts of memory,
But her love for him grows each day of them apart,
And she knows, "He always loves me!"
Written by Kong Vendy:-D
Comments
hehe...i'm kidding.
this is heart-breaking poem. The pain of being away from your beloved must be more than words. But you seem to udnerstand the feeling inside out. Write more dude, love it.
Ven, true man, as I said, I felt that when I put myself in their shoe and reading all that...
To Pheary: thanks!!! lolz...interested in becoming my personal editor?lolz...
To BarBEE: hahahha...it's okay!!! Now that u know it, pls keep praying that evrything will go smoothly...
To Gaara: Cruel???Really???hahaha...sorry if it really sounds so to you, dude:-D But honestly i didn;t mean to make it that way loloz...
ven: it's nice poem.
Pheary: although there is mistake, credit is not deducted cos i credit to meaning rather than other ! Loz...
Potato: turtle is rite, it is painful if u put urself in their shoes.
Hour: it's sound u had experience... kidding !
Barbie: i agree with u... the couple stil be alw close !
wish them good luck ! sweet love for them.
ven: it's nice poem.
Pheary: although there is mistake, credit is not deducted cos i credit to meaning rather than other ! Loz...
Potato: turtle is rite, it is painful if u put urself in their shoes.
Hour: it's sound u had experience... kidding !
Barbie: i agree with u... the couple stil be alw close !
wish them good luck ! sweet love for them.