Boring...!!!


Perching on the edge of his seat,
In his dimly-lit bedroom,
He can hear his aching heart beat,
Nothing shrouds him but gloom.

The sky outside is pitch black,
No trace of movement in the street,
Suddenly he wishes she were back,
Once again, to sweep him off his feet.

Without her, a part of him is missing,
A void within widens with each minute,
Clueless as to what the lonely tomorrow brings,
Weakened, he is now, as ghosts of memory hit.

(just for fun!!!:-D)

Comments

Unknown said…
Describe urself? hehe... Take it easy dude... Relax, ok? I remember once u said u could do it, but now there u come it again...
Anonymous said…
to turtle: man...relax? how could you say it? nobody can do it when it suddenly pops in your head. u told him to relax, help relax him then :p

to the author: memory is like a diary of dialy life. If you open it, read it- you remember it all. Keeping it close makes you miss the old days. But if old days are bad memories, you'd better not to open those pages but continue to write down your present memory in your head. anyway, ask the turtle for relaxation, dude. He's a big help as always. And you gonna find it joyful....hahaha...
Hey hey!!!! Come on, dudes!!! THIS IS NOTHING!!!!! And for God's sake....i was not writing that out of my pain or anything!!!! Jeez...i luv writing love poems, u know that, dun ya? and this does not in any way relate to me!!!!Oh man!!!!
Unknown said…
Potatoe, how to help him relax then? or how to relax him? hehe... don't understand lolz.. :P

hehe when it comes to love poem, we always assume that it's your own story dude, that's why lolz... cuz you have had such a story hehe... don't mind lolz.. no offence!
Anonymous said…
No comment...lolz
To ice: hahahha...it's alirght!! Now that u know it, never assume again in the future hahahh...

To PM: thanks for your "no comment...lolz" comment hahhaha...
To potatoe: hahahah...nice theory about that diary!!! Anyway, dun think he can give me the kinda relaxation i want, man...he is a turtle, anyway hahahha...
Anonymous said…
Now, this is a serious comment from me. You have the same favorite as mine, i mean writing poems. Have u ever moved someone to tears with your poems? I did once and was amazed by its effect..lolz.. It was a Khmer poem though. I hardly wrote English poem. Might give it a try one day.
To PM: you do write poems too? Wait till you read my khmer poems hhahahah...i did write loads before but now i am more into English ones...Who were under that spell of your poem, anyway?
Anonymous said…
Seems like you reply comments more often now. It was my friend. :)
To PM; of course i do!!! Come on, update your blog!! It is barely breathing now!!!

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